Minuit
Knight
Helping George out of the Closet
*splat*
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Post by Minuit on Apr 4, 2010 0:36:05 GMT 10
Title: Undone Rating: PG-13 Length: 176 words Character: Wyldon Summary: Keladry falls.
Undone. Her mind, her heart, her soul, came undone. His soul, his heart, his mind, and most of all his love, was her undoing.
With a touch and a caress, he unravelled her heart. With the softest of whispers and gentlest of kisses, he mesmerised her mind. With a powerful gaze and a heated glance, he ignited her soul. Her love was stoked and stroked by his. What had begun as an ember now burst into flames. Uncontrollable. Unstoppable. She’d come undone.
Kel knew she probably shouldn’t be doing this. It felt wrong. It felt as if she was standing at the edge of a cliff. But at the same time, it felt so right. Every gesture Wyldon made, every time he touched her, moved her, supported her, fought with her, and strengthened her; he made her fall just a little bit more. Unravelling her defences. Undoing her control.
With a cry and a moan, and her heart about to burst, she gave herself over to the inevitable and the frightening. Love.
Wyldon was her undoing.
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Post by Lisa on Apr 4, 2010 1:55:28 GMT 10
And this fic is *my* undoing!! ::loves::
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Rowena
Training Master
back to school... >.<
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Post by Rowena on Apr 4, 2010 2:02:39 GMT 10
Oh, beautifully written!
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Minuit
Knight
Helping George out of the Closet
*splat*
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Post by Minuit on Apr 4, 2010 11:01:26 GMT 10
Thank you both. I think this is the first time Kel's voice has been so clear for me.
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