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Post by fantail on Mar 23, 2010 18:17:04 GMT 10
Title: Memory Rating: G Length: 213 Competitor: Raoul Round/Fight: 3/A Summary: His first sight of Kel brings back a forgotten memory from the past
His Ordeal was brutal, and Raoul laid down on his bed. He had passed and had been knighted by King Roald that night, in front of his friends and family. However, he could not get out of his head that Girl.
She wore a tunic of cream and blue , a distaff border with a grey owl, a crest he didn’t recognize. And the pole arm she was holding . . . Gods! He would not want to be on the receiving end of that! She was standing on a wall and looking out over grass plains with mountains in the distance. She had turned her head and looked at him as monster machines came running up to the wall. “About time you got here, Raoul you almost missed all the fun…”
Then the scene had changed. After that night he never thought of her again until . . . He had ridden in with the Own and as they were passing the pages practice courts something made him stop. And look. A horse was rearing as the page held on tightly to keep from falling off. She looked their way and it hit him. It was her! The girl he had seen in his Ordeal. She was real. And she was here…
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Post by emberrose on Mar 23, 2010 18:29:06 GMT 10
Ooohhhhhhhhhhh!!!! I've been wanting someone to write a fic like this for forever!!!!! I love it!!!! It's perfect!!!
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Post by darkakane on Mar 25, 2010 22:19:25 GMT 10
Wow, I got the tingles reading this...
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Post by bebeschtroumph on Apr 1, 2010 7:14:13 GMT 10
I really like this idea.
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