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Post by jazzyjess on Mar 31, 2010 21:24:30 GMT 10
Title: Ooo-oo-ooh 2 Rating: PG Length: 104 Competitor: Raoul Round/Fight: Final! Summary:
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“I never had kids of my own,” Raoul said, crooning softly as he rocked the little pink bundle in his arms. “By the time I was with Buri, we were both past those years.”
The look Kel gave him was full of understanding. “You can spend as much time here with her as you’d like,” she told him, and smiled. “I would like to name you godfather. If something were to happen to me or Faleron, would you raise him in your footsteps?”
“No,” Raoul answered, meeting her eyes. “I’d raise her in yours.” That was all he said, crooning into the baby’s ear.
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Post by bebeschtroumph on Apr 5, 2010 5:41:36 GMT 10
Loved the last line to absolute bits!
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Post by jazzyjess on Apr 5, 2010 11:38:08 GMT 10
Thanks Re-reading it now (for the first time since writing it!) I actually like that line a little bit, myself!
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Post by Alliecat on Apr 6, 2010 11:29:44 GMT 10
squeeeeee! So cute This is why I love Raoul fic!
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Post by jazzyjess on Apr 14, 2010 16:35:50 GMT 10
Aww, thanks, Allie!
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