Rowena
Training Master
back to school... >.<
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Post by Rowena on Mar 14, 2010 20:38:50 GMT 10
Title: Trick Rating: PG13 Length: 143 Competitor: Dom Round/Fight: 2/B Summary: Dom realizes the trick that's been played on him, and it hurts.
Neal doesn’t realize, but Dom guess that he and his cousin have just been the victims of an elaborate ruse, played on them by the women they’ve given their hearts to. He’s finally put together the way he never sees Yuki when Kel is “working” in her rooms-she always tells him to leave, too, citing that she needs to concentrate-and the way Kel’s face is flushed and her hair a mess when she returns from “girl time” with Yuki. (“Really, Dom, it’s boring, you wouldn’t want to stay-why don’t you go out with Neal?” she tells him.) He has no proof of their affair, but his suspicion is enough to make him angry enough to snap at Neal and accidentally bruise Kel when he makes love to her that night. All he can think is Yamani vixens, taking advantage of two Tortallan men.
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domluvr
Squire
♥ Dom ♥
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Post by domluvr on Jul 15, 2010 10:21:35 GMT 10
Poor Dom, his frustration is so evident. But I must say... I love how he vents his frustrations by umm... going a little rough.
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Post by katieheidie on Jul 15, 2010 10:26:52 GMT 10
Wow, I never thought about this situation before. Very well written.
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