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Post by max on May 4, 2010 11:18:26 GMT 10
Title: Radiance Rating: G Prompt: Same But Different Category: 250 Words Word count: 207 Summary: In which Briar overcomes spiritual inertia; with a little help. Post WotE and Melting Stones.
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It's incongruous, of course, how quickly one's life can change.
The soul healer says this is what he has been struggling with since his mother died - he wants to argue, say: I barely even remember her; but then, that isn't what he's paying for - and that until he learns to accept such transience, he will continue to fall under the shadow of Gyonxe.
She'd told him not to meet Rosethorn and Evvy when they came into port, though, too, which probably just goes to show what that bleater knows.
Because when she steps out into the light, face framed by her perennial headscarf, the light glossing her skin a rich, honey gold, something in him tightens.
He knows that she is his, because she always has been: but when she comes down the gangway and into his arms, standing on tiptoe with the smell of ozone in her hair, the air is suddenly brighter in his lungs, in a way it hasn't been in a long, long time.
'I missed you.'
'You won't be rid of me that easily, Briar Moss.'
And he can't imagine ever wanting to be.
Stay still long enough and you will feel the earth turn beneath your feet.
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Post by wordy on May 4, 2010 12:03:07 GMT 10
This is just so gorgeous! Beautiful descriptions and language, I can really imagine Briar thinking those things.
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Post by max on May 4, 2010 12:26:24 GMT 10
Thanks!
I'm so pleased that so many people have been writing Emelan fics...
Also that I got to showcase one of my favouritest pairings (albeit in a drabble...) ;D
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Rowena
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Post by Rowena on May 6, 2010 9:20:43 GMT 10
Yeah, I feel stupid--the pairing is Evvy/Briar, right?
Yay for Emelan-verse, and the language is truly gorgeous. I love the last line to bits. Wonderful writing!
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Post by PeroxidePirate on May 6, 2010 10:18:03 GMT 10
This is beautiful, and I'm so intrigued by the relationship between Briar and Evvy. This drabble tells just enough to make me desperately want to know more.
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Post by max on May 6, 2010 20:54:21 GMT 10
Yeah, I feel stupid--the pairing is Evvy/Briar, right? Yay for Emelan-verse, and the language is truly gorgeous. I love the last line to bits. Wonderful writing! Thank you! This is beautiful, and I'm so intrigued by the relationship between Briar and Evvy. This drabble tells just enough to make me desperately want to know more. Thanks I love that Briar and Evvy's relationship is so esoteric, because it so completely fits their personalities. The way in WotE and Melting Stones it's hinted at but never explored is so tantalising. I hope Tammy writes moar about them.
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Post by clairshadows on May 22, 2010 23:25:59 GMT 10
Beautiful drabble I like the way I can really hear Briar in this.
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Post by max on May 23, 2010 8:11:45 GMT 10
Thank you
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