Minuit
Knight
Helping George out of the Closet
*splat*
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Post by Minuit on May 31, 2010 20:09:42 GMT 10
Title: Exposed Rating: PG (for the peekaboo) Prompt: same but different Category: 100 words drabble Word count: 100 Summary: Alanna gets exposed before the court, in AU.
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“We are the same, you and I.” A dark, seductive voiced called from the shadows.
Swallowing back bitter tears, she ignored the taunting laughter and stumbled deeper into the dark. She tried not to flinch as ghostly hands reached for her, pinching and pulling.
I’m nothing like you, she’d shouted. Roger lied and betrayed the Crown. She’d lied to serve the Crown.
“Join me love, or be destroyed.”
Never.
So he drove her out of court, her name and reputation ruined.
“Look Majesties!” He pulled and pointed, cruelly mocking her exposed breast. “A female. Demon! She plots against the Crown.”
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ETA: Had to change a 'He' to a 'She'.
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Post by greenie on May 31, 2010 22:37:26 GMT 10
Aww, poor Alanna. I can see Roger doing this though! And I like the 'love', it's the perfect crazy-Roger touch.
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Post by PeroxidePirate on May 31, 2010 23:15:31 GMT 10
Wow, this is a chilling possibility. And I agree, it's perfect Roger.
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Rowena
Training Master
back to school... >.<
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Post by Rowena on Jun 1, 2010 0:25:00 GMT 10
Great writing! Such wonderful emotion in so few words
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Post by journeycat on Jun 1, 2010 2:21:58 GMT 10
Wow, this is fascinating! I love how you've expounded on Roger's cruelty.
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Minuit
Knight
Helping George out of the Closet
*splat*
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Post by Minuit on Jun 1, 2010 13:24:05 GMT 10
Thanks guys I'm glad you liked it. It really wanted to go to a darker place, and I had to really struggle not to let it
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