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Post by Rachy on May 30, 2010 19:36:29 GMT 10
Title: Potential Rating: PG Prompt: #3: Same but different Category: 100 words Word Count: 100 words Summary: Alex knows Delia and Josiane are not only flighty noblewomen.
He sees them often, ghosting through the halls, giggling arm in arm, flirting over wineglasses and being the flighty noblewomen Court sees, but he knows they are not.
The rest of Court fails to be entranced by the words falling passionately from Delia’s mouth, her eyes alive with the fever of bringing Roger back, or see Josiane’s cheeks glow as they tell of Thom’s seduction. They don’t hear the sweet murmur of their plotting, or see the anxious entangling of fingers, hands closing over his.
They have more potential, then to be foolish noblewomen, but that is how they remain.
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Post by PeroxidePirate on May 30, 2010 22:21:22 GMT 10
Oh, you've given some wonderful depth to all three characters here. I always the thought those ladies were as dangerous as the supposed leaders of the uprising.
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Post by greenie on May 30, 2010 22:44:12 GMT 10
It's really fascinating, getting to see these two through Alex's eyes. You've given them all a lot of depth!
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Post by Rachy on Jun 6, 2010 11:19:44 GMT 10
Thankyou both I was wary of the depth, because there was more that I cut out, so I'm happy that it's still showcased.
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