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Post by Alliecat on May 23, 2010 13:06:34 GMT 10
Title: Addiction Rating: PG Prompt: Walking the Line Category: 100 words Summary: He may be the cause, but she still hates herself.
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She feels so guilty.
But it feels so good.
It began a perverted duty. Keladry lost the battle with Blayce and became his slave. But time wore on and it became something more. Now it is an obsession.
After the terrible deed is done she is tormented. She has betrayed her people. It may not go on.
But just one look at his face entraps her.
There is no alcohol or trickery here. It is only him and his mysterious powers.
And she cannot help but be entranced. She does not understand why, but she still feels this sick addiction.
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Post by PeroxidePirate on May 23, 2010 13:11:09 GMT 10
Ooh, wow. Amazing concept. It's chillingly weird, but I love where you went with it.
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Post by greenie on May 23, 2010 18:53:19 GMT 10
Wow. It's fascinating and really chilling at the same time! I like how the first couple of sentences make it seem like it's just someone cheating on someone else. It's well written!
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Rowena
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Post by Rowena on May 23, 2010 23:21:16 GMT 10
Oh, wow. I love how it just seems like cheating and then gets progressivley more twisted (and in this case, that's a good thing!). Great writing!
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Post by Alliecat on May 24, 2010 12:18:06 GMT 10
Thanks guys! I was kind of wary about writing Kel/Blayce, especially since it's a very strange/creepy pairing, but I decided that it would be a good challenge
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Post by Verasque on May 29, 2010 12:45:26 GMT 10
My goodness! This was utterly unexpected, yet you pulled it off with finesse. I can't help but just *stare*, because it really is fascinating.
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Post by Alliecat on Jun 4, 2010 7:36:16 GMT 10
Thanks Joa!
This fic was kinda unexpected for me too- I never really thought that I would write something like this.
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domluvr
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Post by domluvr on Jun 5, 2010 3:23:48 GMT 10
Eep! I don't know whether to squee in excitement or gag. Kel and Blayce. Definitely disturbing. But it's so shocking, it's brilliant! ;D I love how you were able to pull such an unlikely/creepy pairing off so well! *revels in the originality*
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Post by Katty on Jun 7, 2010 10:49:35 GMT 10
Eek! Very twisted and creepy! Excellent work
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