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Post by PeroxidePirate on May 31, 2010 6:28:12 GMT 10
Title: Sense Rating: PG Prompt: #1 Feelings and Emotions Category: 250 words Word count: 150 words Summary: Rosto is having a good day. (Character and plot spoilers for Terrier)
Rosto looked back. No one had followed them into the alley. Phelan gasped for breath, but he'd kept up when everyone else fell behind.
“We made it,” Rosto whispered, blood dripping from a cut on his cheek.
Phelan laughed, half-disbelieving. “I've never felt so –"
“Alive?” Rosto murmured. “It has that effect, running for your life.”
“Thank Mith- no, Kyp-”
“Shut up!” Rosto snapped, sealing his hand over Phelan's mouth. “Don't you know anything? The less you get his attention, the better!”
“Sorry.” Phelan's lips moved against Rosto's hand. “I thought...”
“Thought you were rogue, now?” Rosto's voice couldn't have been heard ten feet away. “Thought you could appeal to our god? No one does that – anyway, no one with sense.”
“Not even you?”
“Well, now.” Rosto moved his hand to Phelan's cheek, grinning. “Who says I have sense?” He kissed the other man, quick but hard. “Phelan. I'm the Rogue.”
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Post by Verasque on May 31, 2010 10:29:38 GMT 10
I love how you managed to bring out such a minor moment, and give it that impact. Amazing drabble!
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Post by PeroxidePirate on May 31, 2010 10:34:35 GMT 10
Thank you!
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Post by greenie on May 31, 2010 12:28:07 GMT 10
*dies* Rosto/Phelan can be added to the list of Things Nicki Needs To Write More Of. ;D *squee*
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Post by PeroxidePirate on May 31, 2010 23:11:01 GMT 10
Aw, thanks! ;D
(There's a list? Oh dear.)
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Rowena
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Post by Rowena on Jun 4, 2010 4:03:20 GMT 10
Seconded I love this moment, and the bit about never imploring Kyproith. And the last bit Good job!
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Post by PeroxidePirate on Jun 4, 2010 9:15:14 GMT 10
Thanks. Sometime I'll write a proper fic about Kyprioth, but I like to mention how you shouldn't mention him.
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