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Post by wordy on May 10, 2009 17:45:14 GMT 10
Title: Ambition Rating: PG Prompt: Switch (though could probably work for Villains too) Category: up to 250 words Word count: 122 Summary: A switch in Lioness Rampant. Can Alanna win against this villain?
By the time she reached the catacombs, aching and sweaty from her duel with Alex, Alanna was not surprised by what she found there.
“How--how could you...?” she panted, leaning against the wall.
Thom’s grin was unnatural. She couldn’t meet his eyes, for fear of what was creeping there. His face was stretched and dry. A mask.
“You never had enough ambition, sister.”
His attack came without warning, the shadows closing in on her from every corner and crevice in the room. Under the pressure of his Gift—gods, it was strong!—she struggled uselessly. Only trickles of her pure purple Gift could be seen in the choking fog of his black storm. Lightning’s crystal gave one final pulse of light...
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Lass
Rider Trainee
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Post by Lass on May 11, 2009 2:37:40 GMT 10
Wow, talk about intense. I love it. ***** stars. That last line was like, BAM!
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Post by ubiquitous on May 12, 2009 22:46:07 GMT 10
Ooh, this was an interesting switch! And very nicely done!
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Post by Katty on May 12, 2009 23:42:23 GMT 10
Snap! I didn't even THINK of this switch! Great work
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Post by Lisa on May 17, 2009 15:33:55 GMT 10
^____^ Awesome switch!!
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