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Post by Seek on Jun 1, 2009 1:16:23 GMT 10
Title: Honor Rating: G Prompt: #3, Villain Category: 100 words Word count: 100 words Summary: He is Bazhir, son of the Chief of the Rock Serpent tribe. Honor is burned into his bones. (also posted to FFN: www.fanfiction.net/s/5089314/9/)He thinks women have no place as warriors. That is against generations of Bazhir tradition he has learned and is proud of. No matter what the Northerners do, the Bazhir uphold tradition, because they are the Bazhir and the Tradition is what binds them. To break Tradition is to be without honor. Only later does he remember that Tradition forbids the oppression of women and children as well. He is Bazhir, son of the Chief of the Rock Serpent tribe. Honor is burned into his bones. And so it is that, he, Zahir ibn Alhaz, will not act with dishonor.
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Post by ubiquitous on Jun 1, 2009 10:37:52 GMT 10
Ooh, I really like this!! Wonderfully done! ♥
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Post by incarnadine on Jun 2, 2009 19:32:52 GMT 10
Just beautiful. You write him wonderfully!
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Post by Katty on Jul 19, 2009 12:14:35 GMT 10
Wonderful writing style, and a thought provoking take on the prompt
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Post by Seek on Jul 19, 2009 18:53:03 GMT 10
Thanks! xD
Someone told me Zahir was actually from the Soaring Eagle tribe, but since I never read up on TP's interviews, I never knew.. >.<
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Post by zbilja on Jul 19, 2009 21:30:05 GMT 10
Wow. That's all I say - wow.
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