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Post by Katty on May 4, 2009 19:42:35 GMT 10
Title: Scum Rating: PG Prompt: Switch Category: up to 250 words Word count: 198 words Summary: Dom teaches a Squire respect. - - - “Scum” Joren violently scuffed the dirt with his foot, watching it settle over the fallen man’s tunic. “You’re traitorous scum, not fit for the realm’s service.” Turning to leave, Joren changed his mind, leaning down until he was close to the man’s face. “Go back to the bitch that whelped you while you still can” he hissed, taking care to spit in Lerant’s eyes. “Stone Mountain.” Dom’s blue eyes were hard as he approached. Without warning, he grabbed Joren by the scruff of his tunic, choking the younger man as he lifted him clear off his feet. “If I catch you interfering with a member of the Own again, I will punish you as one, am I clear?” Joren remained silent, instead trying to kick the Sergeant. Dom, much stronger than the sixteen year old, shook him like a dog until he stopped. “Yes, Sergeant Domitan” Dom prompted. Joren glared at him with two years worth of hatred. “Yes Sergeant Domitan” he managed to choke out. Dom dropped him without warning, watching him land in the dirt next to Lerant. “I don’t care if My Lord thinks you’re fit to be his Squire. Everyone else knows you aren’t.”
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Post by ubiquitous on May 4, 2009 19:44:29 GMT 10
You are the bestest! ♥ Just omg!!! *flails*
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anilaurel
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Post by anilaurel on May 5, 2009 10:18:11 GMT 10
Awesome AU that was awesome.
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Post by Katty on May 5, 2009 10:32:25 GMT 10
Haha thanks
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Post by Fenella on May 6, 2009 11:04:06 GMT 10
Ouch! You made me feel quite sorry for Joren. He's just so misunderstood...
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Post by Katty on May 12, 2009 23:44:01 GMT 10
Thanks for the review, Fen
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Post by Rosie on May 13, 2009 22:22:30 GMT 10
*Dom crush*
Fabulous, love the intensity.
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Post by Katty on May 17, 2009 21:19:59 GMT 10
Thanks for your reviews, everyone.
And Rosie, ew!
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Post by Lisa on May 18, 2009 1:14:18 GMT 10
Yeah... that's awesome. Though I can't fathom why Joren was chosen... LOL!
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Post by girlcalledsun on Jun 3, 2009 6:42:33 GMT 10
Oh, how magnificent is this? And how much would Joren and Lerant fight? Dom is magnificent. I want to read a whole AU of this now. Best AU ever.
*Sits quietly and breaths into a paper bag*
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Post by zbilja on Jul 18, 2009 0:51:59 GMT 10
Yay. Dom!fic!
*squeals like the fangirl she is*
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