anilaurel
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Post by anilaurel on May 2, 2009 8:39:54 GMT 10
Title: Flee Rating: G Prompt: #1 Switch Category: 100 words Word count: 100 Summary: Arram watches his teacher flee
I never thought this would happen, the young man thought, as he watched his teacher pack his few belongings. While he knew it wasn't his fault, the mage still felt guilty for not protecting his friend.
The proof and witnesses to Lindhall's guilt were ready to stand for his mock trial. He knew what to do now-- protect the rest of his friends and feed the birds.
The student helped Master Reed escape after he had been accused of helping slaves to freedom. Now Lindhall used the same system himself. His parting words rang in his ears, “Be careful Arram.”
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Post by heatherneather on May 2, 2009 9:05:03 GMT 10
I like this drabble a lot.
It's from a point of view that I wouldn't have considered- so very original.
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Post by Katty on May 2, 2009 11:09:42 GMT 10
Ohh wow, the Arram/Lindhall switch didn't even occur to me! Nice work
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Post by ubiquitous on May 4, 2009 20:03:39 GMT 10
I adore this. ^.^ Very interesting idea.
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Post by Fenella on May 6, 2009 10:56:13 GMT 10
This interesting thing about the switch is that it makes me wonder what Lindhall must have felt when his student fled. Great work - I especially like that you ended with the warning!
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Post by Lisa on May 17, 2009 15:27:19 GMT 10
Oh! OH! ::loves::
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Pandesme
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Post by Pandesme on Feb 3, 2011 6:44:01 GMT 10
This kind of confused me at first so I had to read it twice, but once I got it I loved it. Very interesting!
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