aurorax
Queen's Rider
Captain Crazy
Drabbling Away!
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Post by aurorax on Sept 22, 2009 13:50:01 GMT 10
Title: So Far Apart Rating: PG Word Count: 75 Summary: Kally and Roald share secrets.
They shared everything no one else could know as children- Roald never told anyone about the nights she went riding, the hours she spent making it look like she was a natural, and not once did Kally laugh at his hidden fears of duty and mathematics, friendships and Lord Wyldon; but children grow up, and he could only watch as the ship melted into the mist of the harbor, leaving him alone with her secrets.
OR, since I'm trying to practice being briefer:
They shared everything no one else could know as children; but children grow up, and he could only watch as the ship melted into the mist of the harbor, leaving him alone with her secrets.
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Post by Verasque on Sept 22, 2009 14:05:37 GMT 10
Beautiful!
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Post by ubiquitous on Sept 22, 2009 14:52:11 GMT 10
This is just lovely!
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Post by theantichris on Sept 22, 2009 15:07:42 GMT 10
Beautiful. Roald's such an interesting character.
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Minuit
Knight
Helping George out of the Closet
*splat*
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Post by Minuit on Sept 22, 2009 16:03:06 GMT 10
Lovely sentiments Nice fic.
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Post by Rosie on Sept 22, 2009 19:15:56 GMT 10
<3 So cute - and interesting twist, because usually, fics of this sort are of Kalasin going off into the unknown and not the ones she's leaving behind. Lovely!
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Post by Seek on Sept 22, 2009 19:44:18 GMT 10
Awww man, it's a very strange sense of Kally having to grow up and Roald not yet ): Kind of sad. I like!
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Post by Katty on Sept 26, 2009 20:47:30 GMT 10
Awww
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