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Post by greenie on Sept 22, 2009 10:12:54 GMT 10
Title: Apology Rating: G Word count:182 Summary: At least young Gary of Naxen was sincere when he started... Notes: Not an example of brilliant writing or anything, but it was fun to write. “Mother and Father, I’m very, very sorry and we didn’t do it on purpose, it just sort of happened but it was an accident and I’m very sorry and it’ll never happen again and please, please don’t ban me from riding Pony because *hic* I didn’t do it on purpose so it wouldn’t really be fair and you banned me from riding him last week anyway so you need to think up something different but you don’t really need to think up anything because it wasn't just MY fault, it was Jon’s fault too but nobody ever tells him off even though he did it too but he gets away with it just because he's the prince and I’m older even though it’s only by a year and it's NOT FAIR and I’m *hic* IT’S NOT FUNNY, I’m sick of it, and I'm never ever EVER going to speak to you again because you're always mean to me and you’re laughing at me and you always blame me when it was Jon’s fault too and it was a STUPID, UGLY fountain anyway!'
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allymarty
Rider Trainee
I also answer to Allie.
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Post by allymarty on Sept 22, 2009 10:19:25 GMT 10
I humbly bow to your superior ability to make a drabble out of one sentence! Wow!!
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Post by journeycat on Sept 22, 2009 10:20:06 GMT 10
AHHH I LOVED THIS. When I first saw it I was like, Oh no, but the huge paragraph is so perfect. I love Gary!
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Post by wordy on Sept 22, 2009 10:30:13 GMT 10
HAHA! Love it!
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anilaurel
Queen's Rider
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Post by anilaurel on Sept 22, 2009 11:19:03 GMT 10
I love young Gary, this is so cute.
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Post by ubiquitous on Sept 22, 2009 11:58:22 GMT 10
Love it! And woah at the length!
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Post by theantichris on Sept 22, 2009 12:54:44 GMT 10
OMG, best use of a run-on sentence ever!
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Post by Verasque on Sept 22, 2009 13:20:26 GMT 10
^ Agreed. The *hics*, I tell you
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Post by Rachy on Sept 22, 2009 14:42:21 GMT 10
I was laughing through most of this, and it was funnier because you had the don't laugh at me bits perfectly placed And so true in relation to Jon. Spoilt little prince, indeed
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renegade
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look out, Jess was about
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Post by renegade on Sept 22, 2009 14:58:59 GMT 10
LOL! I love it!
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Minuit
Knight
Helping George out of the Closet
*splat*
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Post by Minuit on Sept 22, 2009 15:49:38 GMT 10
LOL, *hic* Loves it. The length of it really works though Gary's adorable ;D.
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Post by Rosie on Sept 22, 2009 19:10:15 GMT 10
Genius! Poor, put-upon Gary
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Post by Seek on Sept 22, 2009 19:45:13 GMT 10
LOL! Looks like Daja and Nia aren't the only ones who know how to make a sentence last Rock on!
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Post by Katty on Sept 26, 2009 20:48:02 GMT 10
Wow... a lot of words
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Hopeless
Standard Bearer
Faleron Fan
I used to be Kel of King’s Reach. Then I decided hopeless was more accurate.
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Post by Hopeless on Aug 2, 2020 18:06:33 GMT 10
Awww I love little Gary
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