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Post by queenscovegirl on Sept 21, 2009 18:53:20 GMT 10
Title: Knightly Servitude Rating (and Warnings): Rated R for suggested sexual content. Word Count: 24 Words. Summary: At Roalds coronation, Kel ponders what kind of service she will provide her king. Notes: I just couldn't help myself :P
Kel couldn't help but smile as she watched her prince be crowned as king, she would gladly get on her knees to serve him.
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Post by Rachy on Sept 21, 2009 19:09:00 GMT 10
Apart from some slight errors in grammar, this was good I love your sig, too.
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Post by queenscovegirl on Sept 21, 2009 19:13:23 GMT 10
Thanks, I should have waited to post this since I'm half asleep right now. (And grammer's not my stong suit as is, lol) Anything grammatical I should change right now? (Thanks! Isha made it )
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Post by Rachy on Sept 21, 2009 19:18:16 GMT 10
Maybe just the knee's to knees. That was the most obvious thing, and maybe a king to as king. Just little things
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Post by queenscovegirl on Sept 21, 2009 19:28:28 GMT 10
There, thanks for the tips!
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Post by ubiquitous on Sept 21, 2009 20:19:06 GMT 10
Way cool. And I love the double entendre.
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Post by Verasque on Sept 21, 2009 21:41:06 GMT 10
A lovely sentiment, and naaauuugh-ty!
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Post by Katty on Sept 26, 2009 20:40:18 GMT 10
Hahaha love the word play and pairing
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