Milla
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Giant Intelligent Fancy Talking Spider
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Post by Milla on Sept 26, 2009 10:13:59 GMT 10
Title: Exploring, G Rating (and Warnings): G Word Count: 45 Summary: New places are always fresh and exciting. Notes: Related to 'This is how the story unfolds' happens before that story. Minor character alert ( I mean one mention by name in one book type of thing)
The Mortal Realms felt different, they were new and exciting (unlike the countless, wearisome Dragonmeets) and Summerwing was going to explore it all; with a lazy flap of his pale gold wings he angled over to that peculiar thing he heard was called a town.
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Post by queenscovegirl on Sept 26, 2009 12:30:45 GMT 10
Very interesting And cute, lol.
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Post by Verasque on Sept 26, 2009 18:03:21 GMT 10
Quite majestic in tone. Wonderful sentence!
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Post by theantichris on Sept 26, 2009 21:58:19 GMT 10
Ooh, this is interesting! Nice dragon voice and dramatic irony.
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