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Post by Seek on Sept 23, 2009 16:13:28 GMT 10
Title: Lady, or Seek is being naughty. Rating: G Word count: 32 words and 35 words Summary: Two reflections on two ladies. Notes: This is Seek being naughty and playing with form again. Since there are two sentences, do treat it as two fics entered at once, simply because I felt it was the only way to convey the juxtaposition.
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Our Lady of the Twilight
Twilight falls, with the slow drawing down of a thin, dusky veil
She thought she was content to live in the quiet, with the earth against her fingers and the silent communion with her plants, until the messenger came and Berenene's life changed forever.
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Our Lady of the Noon
The sun breaks forth at noon, sharp, tart, and with a lingering ruddy glow
She thought she was content somewhat to live an unknown life on the farm, the earth against her fingers and the silent communion with her plants, until the Dedicate came and Rosethorn's life changed forever.
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Post by ubiquitous on Sept 23, 2009 20:35:47 GMT 10
Oh, this is just lovely!! ♥
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Post by queenscovegirl on Sept 27, 2009 8:51:21 GMT 10
Very lovely!
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