opalgirl
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Post by opalgirl on Sept 22, 2009 13:59:04 GMT 10
Title: Two Days Straight Rating: PG Word Count: 37 Summary: Coram knows what's come with the lady's two days of labor. Notes: I'm getting to the end of them, I promise. Lady Marinie has labored two days straight, the noise from within the room has been dreadful, and when Maude exits the birthing chamber, her face drawn and tears in her eyes, Coram knows what's come of it.
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anilaurel
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Post by anilaurel on Sept 22, 2009 14:01:25 GMT 10
That's so sad, but beautifully written. Well done
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Post by Verasque on Sept 22, 2009 14:03:41 GMT 10
Thank you for giving us a glimpse of Marinie. It was made even better seeing it from Coram's POV.
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Post by ubiquitous on Sept 22, 2009 14:50:59 GMT 10
Aww, so sad, but wonderfully done!
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Post by theantichris on Sept 22, 2009 15:06:59 GMT 10
Sad and lovely.
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renegade
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Post by renegade on Sept 22, 2009 15:27:12 GMT 10
Oh it's so sad! I love your use of POV.
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Minuit
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Post by Minuit on Sept 22, 2009 16:12:22 GMT 10
*tears* Poor Coram. So sad.
But nice fic.
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Post by Seek on Sept 22, 2009 20:39:23 GMT 10
Oh man, it's so sad ):
Poor Marinie. And poor Maude and Coram!
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opalgirl
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Post by opalgirl on Sept 23, 2009 0:26:33 GMT 10
I know. It is sad. Marinie was well-liked by the people at Trebond and basically kept the place running when Lord Alan would've forgotten about it/them, in my own head. Thanks, guys!
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Post by queenscovegirl on Sept 27, 2009 8:30:27 GMT 10
Awe, very sad
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opalgirl
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Post by opalgirl on Sept 27, 2009 12:13:48 GMT 10
Awe, very sad I know!
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