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Post by opalgirl on Sept 22, 2009 12:52:02 GMT 10
Title: Passed Over Rating: G Word Count: 28 Summary: A reflection on the bond between twins and why it's not always fun.
"Da!" Aly cries and flings herself into their father's arms, completely disregarding him; it doesn't matter that Alan knows Aly's always had a special bond with Da – it still hurts.
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Post by journeycat on Sept 22, 2009 12:57:00 GMT 10
Very realistic - I can see Alan being a bit overshadowed. Poor guy
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Post by wordy on Sept 22, 2009 13:05:08 GMT 10
Lovely and sad!
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Post by theantichris on Sept 22, 2009 14:55:31 GMT 10
Aww, poor Alan. This is beautifully done.
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Post by renegade on Sept 22, 2009 15:15:34 GMT 10
Aww Alan! I love this.
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Post by Verasque on Sept 22, 2009 15:38:23 GMT 10
It hurts my heart. Just lovely!
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Post by Minuit on Sept 22, 2009 16:25:52 GMT 10
So lovely and sad at the same time!
Great work.
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Post by opalgirl on Sept 23, 2009 0:50:54 GMT 10
Thanks, guys! (Also, poor Alan indeed. )
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Post by Lisa on Sept 23, 2009 6:06:15 GMT 10
I hate sad!Alan. Write a happy Alan one, now!!!
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Post by opalgirl on Sept 23, 2009 6:12:42 GMT 10
I hate sad!Alan. Write a happy Alan one, now!!! But... but. Alan has a reason to be sad. I will try for a happy one-sentence, I promise.
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Post by queenscovegirl on Sept 27, 2009 8:19:44 GMT 10
Awe *cries for Alan*
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Post by opalgirl on Sept 27, 2009 12:20:30 GMT 10
And he's totally not the sort to tell Aly he's upset. Thanks.
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