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Post by Verasque on Sept 23, 2009 20:47:24 GMT 10
Title: A Clash of Queens
Rating: G
Words: 27
Summary: Thayet has everything Delia ever wanted.
Looking hatefully at the Sarain princess—no, foreigner—before her, Delia wondered what she had missed in the time that her greatest dream became her greatest downfall.
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Post by journeycat on Sept 23, 2009 21:20:15 GMT 10
Classic - Delia reminds me a lot of Queen Anne from the Tudor era in this. Very realistic and well-written!
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Post by ubiquitous on Sept 23, 2009 21:26:09 GMT 10
This is wonderful!  |
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Post by theantichris on Sept 23, 2009 21:30:00 GMT 10
Nice! You write Delia so interestingly.
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opalgirl
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Post by opalgirl on Sept 23, 2009 23:36:28 GMT 10
Very Delia, and I can see her having issues with Thayet.
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Post by Rosie on Sept 24, 2009 3:08:42 GMT 10
Ooh, gorgeous - short and powerful!
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Post by Lisa on Sept 24, 2009 4:17:53 GMT 10
Oooh, I love it!! ^__^
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Post by Verasque on Sept 24, 2009 17:17:48 GMT 10
Delia is very complex  Thank you for the comments! |
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Post by queenscovegirl on Sept 24, 2009 18:43:26 GMT 10
Very intersting, you write Delia very well  |
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Post by Seek on Sept 25, 2009 0:45:11 GMT 10
That sentence alone says volumes about what Delia missed. Great job! |
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Post by Verasque on Oct 6, 2009 13:56:34 GMT 10
Thanks guys! |
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Thank you for the comments!
Maybe once we'd have seen it during Smackdown!