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Post by wordy on Aug 30, 2010 9:06:56 GMT 10
Title: The Beginning Rating: G Word Count: 19 Summary: A red haired rival gets under Alex's skin.
Duke Gareth had trained him to be the best; Alex supposed he just had to be better than that.
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Post by journeycat on Aug 30, 2010 9:20:25 GMT 10
Ah, I like that you gave life to Alex's competitive streak. This strikes me as just being so in character.
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Rowena
Training Master
back to school... >.<
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Post by Rowena on Aug 30, 2010 9:27:20 GMT 10
Wow, great character insight, especially in one sentance!
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Post by Elvensmith on Aug 30, 2010 10:31:01 GMT 10
Lovely!
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Post by ev on Aug 30, 2010 10:47:38 GMT 10
This is sooo Alex.
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Post by Verasque on Aug 30, 2010 11:08:47 GMT 10
Such a purposeful use of the semi-colon. It's amazing and so fitting.
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Post by PeroxidePirate on Aug 30, 2010 11:15:20 GMT 10
Ok, I'm feeling the Alex love lately!
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