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Post by max on Aug 30, 2010 10:45:21 GMT 10
Title: Legacy Rating: PG Words: 10 Summary: Daja (brass) Notes: So this was all I could think up, and I apologise.
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This is what fire gives her skin: copper and tin.
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Post by journeycat on Aug 30, 2010 10:46:44 GMT 10
I like the rhyme in this! And I think you've captured the essence of Daja, as well.
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Post by ev on Aug 30, 2010 10:49:54 GMT 10
Hey, this is good!
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Post by max on Aug 30, 2010 10:56:48 GMT 10
Thank you! I feel like the rhyme is some kind of defeat at the hands of my sense of kitsch, but, y'know
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Post by Verasque on Aug 30, 2010 11:16:49 GMT 10
You're truly a wonder with the English language.
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Post by max on Aug 30, 2010 11:24:55 GMT 10
Such a lovely thing to say! Thank you x
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