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Post by max on Aug 30, 2010 0:44:18 GMT 10
Title: Lord Lazarus Rating: G Word Count: 17 Summary: Thom, Roger-raising. Notes: It's almost 3am here, so sorry.
Only when the final word leaves his mouth does it occur to him just what he's done.
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Post by journeycat on Aug 30, 2010 0:50:00 GMT 10
Oh, snap - I love this brief insight into Thom, the too-late realization that his pride has bested him. Very fascinating, Max!
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Post by max on Aug 30, 2010 1:31:46 GMT 10
Thank you Mandi!
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Post by Seek on Aug 30, 2010 1:36:47 GMT 10
This is so typical Thom. Acting first, thinking later. =/
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Post by Alliecat on Aug 30, 2010 1:44:05 GMT 10
Eee, I love this- not only is it very Thom, but bravo for the short sentence.
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Post by max on Aug 30, 2010 1:49:41 GMT 10
Thank you guys!
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Post by ev on Aug 30, 2010 5:01:22 GMT 10
Ah, wondeful sentence!
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Post by max on Aug 30, 2010 6:35:31 GMT 10
Thank you ev ^^
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Post by Rowena on Aug 30, 2010 7:08:08 GMT 10
Oh, very cool because it's short, but shows Thom so well. And actually sheds him in a nicer light, like he was just in denial, or pretending he was, not actually thinking it was a good idea after he did it.
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Post by max on Aug 30, 2010 7:29:42 GMT 10
I'm really glad - I like, never write Alanna-era things, so I'm happy to have touched on him appropriately.
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Post by Verasque on Aug 30, 2010 10:24:12 GMT 10
The brevity and the soul-slaying realisation. Bravo!
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Post by ubiquitous on Aug 30, 2010 10:24:58 GMT 10
Awesome sentence!
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Post by max on Aug 30, 2010 10:28:03 GMT 10
Thank you both!
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Post by PeroxidePirate on Aug 30, 2010 11:17:22 GMT 10
Oh, Thom! Fantastic.
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