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Post by Verasque on Aug 30, 2010 14:25:53 GMT 10
Title: Free-fall and Build Rating: G Word Count: 15 Summary: Joren reflects. Notes: For Isha, though this probably isn't what you were after. More later, I promise! Joren wonders how Zahir had become the sand slipping easily through cracks in stone walls.
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Post by Cass on Aug 30, 2010 14:26:13 GMT 10
Lovely!
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Post by journeycat on Aug 30, 2010 14:26:56 GMT 10
How do you manage poetry even in just one sentence?! I don't understand this talent of yours.
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Post by ubiquitous on Aug 30, 2010 14:30:56 GMT 10
Oh so pretty! I'm with Mandi on this one, I don't know how you do it either. :S
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Post by max on Aug 30, 2010 21:15:46 GMT 10
Holy Lord God Of Hosts.
This is achingly beautiful.
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Post by wordy on Aug 30, 2010 21:43:05 GMT 10
Ooh, this is excellent imagery!
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Post by Lisa on Aug 30, 2010 22:26:54 GMT 10
This is perfection, Joa.
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Post by ev on Aug 31, 2010 4:42:05 GMT 10
Amazing, this really is amazing.
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Rowena
Training Master
back to school... >.<
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Post by Rowena on Aug 31, 2010 8:52:52 GMT 10
Oh, beautiful. Simply lovely
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