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Post by Cass on Aug 31, 2010 1:22:33 GMT 10
Title: Mistake Rating: PG-13 Word Count: 33 Summary: He isn't the man she thought he was.
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Jonathan's lips are too cold, his hands furtive and false, and Kel counts down the minutes until he is done and she can pretend that he is nothing to her but her king.
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Post by journeycat on Aug 31, 2010 1:27:30 GMT 10
Poor Kel.
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Post by ev on Aug 31, 2010 1:30:14 GMT 10
The way you describe Jon... I don't like him either!
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Post by max on Aug 31, 2010 9:26:05 GMT 10
Wonderful sentence. It's so emotive in a yucky sense, which is awesome.
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Post by Cass on Aug 31, 2010 13:01:03 GMT 10
Thanks!
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Post by PeroxidePirate on Aug 31, 2010 13:22:36 GMT 10
I agree: convincingly yucky.
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