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Post by Seek on Sept 1, 2010 0:50:11 GMT 10
Title: Mistake Rating: PG Word count: 40 words Summary: He doesn't know which was the mistake.
"Don't," Dove says, hurt flashing across her face, and Liam knows he's made a mistake, but the word Alan hangs between them like a draped curtain, and he doesn't know which way to tug it, or what it will reveal.
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Post by journeycat on Sept 1, 2010 0:57:31 GMT 10
I love how you've incorporated Dove in these Alan/Liam sentences!
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Post by PeroxidePirate on Sept 1, 2010 1:08:21 GMT 10
Oh, lovely! So many places it could go.
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Post by ev on Sept 1, 2010 5:18:50 GMT 10
Oh, this is really good!
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Post by max on Sept 1, 2010 6:36:41 GMT 10
Oh this is so loaded with their turmoil. And completely extraordinary.
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Post by Seek on Sept 1, 2010 20:57:16 GMT 10
Thanks, guys!
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Post by ubiquitous on Sept 1, 2010 21:14:17 GMT 10
I'm loving this triangle
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Post by Seek on Sept 1, 2010 21:29:58 GMT 10
Thanks!
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Rowena
Training Master
back to school... >.<
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Post by Rowena on Sept 5, 2010 6:34:07 GMT 10
I love the idea that Dove knows about it, and all the angst...amazing sentances.
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