rainstormamaya
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Post by rainstormamaya on Sept 27, 2009 20:55:30 GMT 10
Title: In The Darkness Rating: PG Prompt: #12, Behind Closed Doors Words: 150 Summary: They see something is wrong when Dren and Daine sleep. Interesting Times AU.
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In the darkness of the male trainees’ dorm, a boy tossed and turned in his sleep. His face worked and twisted with pain-fear-relief-anger, he moved his hands as if they hurt, and he didn’t cry out.
But Farant and Evin, silently watching his nightmares by the dim light of Padraig’s Gift, could see Dren was screaming inside.
Curled up, hidden in a corner of the stables, a girl slept. Her eyes danced behind the thin skin of her eyelids, eyelashes fluttering, searching for trouble. She was curled in on herself and deathly still, tucked into a neat ball as if trying to protect herself from the world- or the world from her.
When Miri got up in the morning and went down to the stables, she found Daine still there, unmoving and deeply asleep- but when she touched Daine’s shoulder to wake her, the girl woke immediately and shrank away.
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Post by ubiquitous on Sept 28, 2009 10:06:02 GMT 10
Nicely done! Love the use of prompt!
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Post by theantichris on Sept 28, 2009 11:53:52 GMT 10
Intriguing! Masses of hearts for the Riders' concern.
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Forensic Fan '93
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Joren and Kel forever people! HE DIDN'T DIE!!!!! I'M TELLING YOU NOW!!!!
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Post by Forensic Fan '93 on Sept 28, 2009 14:34:22 GMT 10
Very nice! I'm interesting in Dren now...
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Minuit
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Post by Minuit on Sept 28, 2009 22:40:32 GMT 10
This is wonderful!
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rainstormamaya
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Post by rainstormamaya on Sept 30, 2009 17:20:37 GMT 10
Thank you guys!
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