aurorax
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Post by aurorax on Sept 26, 2009 8:00:57 GMT 10
Title: Ordeals Rating: PG Prompt: #12, Behind Closed Doors Words: 54 Summary: Pick your favorite Joren pairing. One sentence.
Everyone knew that you weren’t allowed to speak in the Chamber of Ordeal; but she needed a reason, so she told herself that he had whispered her name with his last quivering breath as he was being crushed by the weight of his past, behind the iron door that had taken so much away.
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Post by ubiquitous on Sept 26, 2009 10:28:54 GMT 10
I'm going Joren/Kel!! Awesome response!
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Post by Rosie on Sept 26, 2009 11:25:01 GMT 10
Gorgeous! I loved the "crushed by the weight of his past".
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Joren and Kel forever people! HE DIDN'T DIE!!!!! I'M TELLING YOU NOW!!!!
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Post by Forensic Fan '93 on Sept 26, 2009 13:51:11 GMT 10
JOREN/KEL!!!!! I loved it!!!
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Post by Seek on Sept 26, 2009 14:13:59 GMT 10
Omg. This was just pure awesome. I'd say Joren/Kel, except someone wrote a brilliant Joren/Maura and now I can't help thinking Joren/Maura
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Post by Verasque on Sept 26, 2009 18:31:51 GMT 10
So heavy, and powerful. Excellent sentence
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aurorax
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Post by aurorax on Sept 29, 2009 14:47:20 GMT 10
Thank you! I've always wondered what happens if you speak in the Chamber, and it seemed like an interesting aspect to give Joren's death.
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Post by Lisa on Oct 9, 2009 13:14:15 GMT 10
Oh, I love this so very much! I lean toward Joren/Maura, personally. But my brain just suddenly went for Joren/Kalasin, and now my head is reeling!! ;D
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