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Post by Katty on Mar 28, 2009 18:42:28 GMT 10
Title: Closet Rating: PG Summary: Affairs don't always go as planned. 100 Words. Dedicated to Lanna. - - - She’d been in worse positions, she supposed. Hiding half-naked in a closet while her father stood six feet away, discussing the price of grain with her lover was still fairly high on the list. Her pride had been hurt when she was unceremoniously tossed in the closet by Gary when he realised they had been interrupted; but it was the scribbling on the inside of the closet, left by previous lovers, that bruised her ego more than anything. - - - The moment the King left, Vania burst out of the closet and stalked out, leaving Gary mumbling his apologies.
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Post by ubiquitous on Mar 28, 2009 18:47:47 GMT 10
Omg, this is just AWESOME. Just awesome. I have no words, I'm still trying to get past, squee, aww and yay
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Serenity
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Post by Serenity on Mar 28, 2009 18:51:20 GMT 10
That first sentence is a killer hook, and your patented surprise, sick, and scarring finale is to die for. ... Good lord, I am morbid tonight. Really, though, excellent as always.
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Post by iridescentdaisies on Mar 28, 2009 19:20:16 GMT 10
This is amazing. It accomplishes so much in so few words and...the pairing. Incredible.
I particularly love the detail about past lovers' writings.
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Post by Katty on Mar 28, 2009 19:22:39 GMT 10
Thank you I'm on a bit of a drabble-writing binge tonight!
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rainstormamaya
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Post by rainstormamaya on Mar 29, 2009 10:03:04 GMT 10
Whoa. I can never quite get my head around the idea of Gary/Vania, but I like this angle on it.
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Post by Lisa on Mar 30, 2009 0:30:59 GMT 10
You are so messed up. I love it. XD
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Post by Katty on Mar 30, 2009 0:42:56 GMT 10
It comes at a price, you know. I tried to write George-fic for Lanna today, and ended up with Gareth/Eleni. I can't write normal stories!!! I blame YOU.
♥
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Post by k4writer02 on Mar 30, 2009 6:44:04 GMT 10
The pairing is a little...disconcerting. But that would be an incredibly award scenario, particularly with the other lover's writing.
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Post by Lisa on Apr 4, 2009 15:52:42 GMT 10
Aww, I'm flattered! I'm glad I could spread my brain-rot.
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