Elsceetaria
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Post by Elsceetaria on Sept 5, 2010 16:52:24 GMT 10
Title: Finally Home Rating : G Word Count: 111 Summary: Tris fully realizes just how right Niko had been years before. Notes: I’m just trying to get back into creative writing after a long break, and words still aren’t exactly my forte, so apologies if this is rough. Also, its my first fanfic written when I wasn’t manic.
Tris gently rode up the stairs to the top of the tower in the house it had taken her years to own and even longer to find and smiled as she embraced the weather around her from the largest rain cloud to the smallest zephyr: She wondered if Niko had seen it all along.
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Post by wordy on Sept 6, 2010 10:13:46 GMT 10
This is lovely in its simplicity, and the last phrase - She wondered if Niko had seen it all along - makes me happy, for some reason.
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Elsceetaria
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Post by Elsceetaria on Sept 6, 2010 12:29:23 GMT 10
Thanks. I reworked that second part a couple time. I'm glad that the way it turned out made you happy.
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Post by PeroxidePirate on Sept 6, 2010 13:00:41 GMT 10
This is very sweet!
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Post by ev on Sept 7, 2010 11:16:37 GMT 10
Very nice!
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Post by ubiquitous on Sept 8, 2010 11:09:39 GMT 10
Lovely.
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Elsceetaria
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Post by Elsceetaria on Sept 9, 2010 0:38:41 GMT 10
Thank you for the nice comments.
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