31_days, 1: Out of the Darkness, G

[ev]

Title: Out of the Darkness
Rating: G
Prompt: 1. healed by wind and sun, August 31_days 
Summary: Tris lives and thinks in weather.    

The days, shrouded by heavy rains, opened up. Tris smiles, the sun playing on her fiery red braids. Water seeps out of her pores, days of sadness and muck crumbling off her as the wind gusts around and through her. 

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Sandry's mouth twitches. Tris is still healing after her battering in Namorn.
But, today, she looks strong and ready. 

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Tris senses movement behind her. Sandry. Their relationship had never been easy, through jealousy and misunderstandings. 
But, today, their relationship has opened up through the clouds.

"How are you feeling?" Sandry asks carefully. Her voice is wispy, like slow tendrils of mist after a soft rain. 
"Oh, much better." Tris answers. 
"Want to take a walk with me?"
Tris grins, the brightness in her eyes says it all.       

[domluvr]

I really like how you showed the connection between Tris and Sandry. This is lovely.

[ev]

Thank you!

[katieheidie]

I really enjoy this Very nice description!

[ev]

*smiles*

[Rowena]

This is very nice But be careful to watch your tenses - it seemed to switch from present to past a few times.

[ev]

Thanks, I'll fix it.

[PeroxidePirate]

I love Tris's connection to weather! This is very sweet.

[ev]

Thanks, Nicki.

[max]

I loved how whimsical the description was. So pretty.

[ev]

Thanks!

[mistrali]

I like the way you show Tris healing through wind, just as she was assailed by it in WotE. And, oh, Tris and Sandry are hardly ever written together.

[Vala]

This is a beautiful friendship story.