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Post by PeroxidePirate on Aug 3, 2010 0:35:19 GMT 10
Title: All Around Rating: PG Prompt: 2. over the world and under the world Summary: It's there, whether you can see it or not.
“Daja?” Kirel called, from the entrance to the forge.
Daja stood motionless in the middle of the room, seemingly oblivious to the smoke that filled the hot air. Brass rods lay in her hands, forgotten.
“Daja!” Kirel repeated. When she still didn't answer, he stepped forward and hesitantly laid a hand on her shoulder.
She flinched in surprise, then gently set down her work and turned to face him. “Oh, hello.”
“Did I sneak up on you?” The blacksmith laughed.
“Sorry. I was concentrating.”
Kirel glanced at the unmodified rods, eyebrows raised in a silent question.
“Yeah, not on that,” she said, with a rueful smile. “There's a lot of magic here. I was, um, watching it.”
“There's magic everywhere, right?” A dedicate but not a mage, Kirel was quietly wistful.
“Everywhere. Over... under... around. I can't imagine not seeing it.” Daja blinked, shaking her head as though to clear it. “Did you want something?”
“I had a question for you. Can we sit down for a minute?”
Daja nodded. “If you like.” She led the way out of the forge.
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Post by katieheidie on Aug 3, 2010 1:53:27 GMT 10
Im so intrigued as to Kirel's question. This is lovely
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Rowena
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Post by Rowena on Aug 3, 2010 3:03:30 GMT 10
I love how you interpreted this prompt - it makes perfect sense, although the obvious way to see it would be as a journey. Wow!
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Post by ev on Aug 3, 2010 4:42:47 GMT 10
This is wonderful!
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domluvr
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Post by domluvr on Aug 3, 2010 7:42:07 GMT 10
You are officially very skilled at taking prompts. ;D
This is so intriguing; I can't wait to see where it goes!
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Post by Lisa on Aug 4, 2010 21:10:08 GMT 10
Oooh, *very* good prompt-interpretation!!
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