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Post by journeycat on Sept 13, 2009 5:58:25 GMT 10
Title: Falling Behind Rating: PG Prompt: #11 Race Words: 259 Summary: She will always be one step ahead of him.
She always pulled ahead somehow.
It was a bitter brew to swallow. Once, his house was prestigious and favored by kings, but that was conveniently easy to forget when one foolish whore ruined it all. Bearing that name now was as much a curse as it was a burden. But her house—what did they ever do but win Jonathan a barbarian bride for his son? They were not as old as his, their history was not as profound. The ink was still wet in the noble Book.
There was a time when, in moments of weakness and even loneliness, he had imagined they were on even footing. After all, he was entitled to far more than for what he settled. Applying for a position as man-at-arms was humiliating, degrading. It was only his lord Raoul who rescued him from that, no matter that he was a simple standard-bearer. Her lot wasn’t so different when it came down to it. No one wanted her, either, but Raoul took her in as well. She was as much a target as he, a boy from a disgraced house. Outcasts, both of them.
And then she had to go and get herself knighted, and suddenly she was somebody. The other men were proud of her even if they tried to hide it. The glow on Raoul’s face practically made him sick with a seething envy he had not known before.
No matter how hard he tried, Lerant could not catch up to her.
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Post by ubiquitous on Sept 13, 2009 9:48:48 GMT 10
Ohhh, this is just wonderful!!! ♥
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Post by theantichris on Sept 13, 2009 11:36:14 GMT 10
This is great! Very complex and insightful.
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Post by Verasque on Sept 13, 2009 14:09:02 GMT 10
Painful and beautiful. It was so well-written
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Post by journeycat on Sept 13, 2009 14:11:32 GMT 10
Thank you so much! ^_^
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Post by greenie on Sept 13, 2009 19:25:11 GMT 10
Aww, poor Lerant. This is really well written!
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Forensic Fan '93
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Joren and Kel forever people! HE DIDN'T DIE!!!!! I'M TELLING YOU NOW!!!!
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Post by Forensic Fan '93 on Sept 17, 2009 5:57:30 GMT 10
I never looked on Lerant in that light... My gods... *tear trickles down my face*
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