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Post by vilomsious on Jun 17, 2010 11:57:19 GMT 10
Title: Strawberries Rating: PG13 Summary: She'd honestly not seen this coming. Notes: A drabble, set in summertime. Mentions of femmeslash, if that bothers you, don't read.
Sandry laughs, head tilted back slightly, a slim, white hand grasping half of a lush, red berry and Daja feels drunk on happiness, laughter and the same red juice that stains her friend's lips.
And she can't resist, something grabs her, and she just can't stop herself.
Briar shouts something in the background, but all Daja knows is she's leaning in and her lips are against Sandry's and, oh, she's being kissed back and...
She tastes like strawberries.
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Post by Lisa on Jun 17, 2010 12:20:00 GMT 10
Oooh, wonderful little visuals you've created with this. I wish it weren't a drabble!!
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Post by greenie on Jun 17, 2010 12:37:59 GMT 10
I think that the description in here is great! It makes it all seem really vivid, and there's also not so much that it distracts from what's happening.
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Post by PeroxidePirate on Jun 17, 2010 16:20:54 GMT 10
*happy sigh* It's so pretty.
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Post by Kit on Jun 20, 2010 23:54:10 GMT 10
Mmmph. I love this. Brief and delicious.
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Post by ev on Jul 25, 2010 8:08:31 GMT 10
This is so captivating and strong.
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Post by katieheidie on Jul 25, 2010 12:23:57 GMT 10
I can play out this whole thing in my head and I love its beauty
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