Kit
Squire
Duchess of Emelan
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Post by Kit on Apr 8, 2010 0:07:14 GMT 10
Title: Spill Rating: R Length: 267 Prompt: 31_days 4: Nothing ended, nothing begun, nothing resolved Summary: Polyam can almost trick them both
“Listen to me.”
Easy, too easy, to think of flame. A flare from a banked fire, surprise from steady depths, leaving blackness to crowd in. Heat on her back. Her hip. Good side and bad. Tangled in her hair, gentle-tight with force to arch her neck, every kiss echoing her words, slaking argument with sweat.
“You haven’t said—”
A laugh, slightly ragged around the edges. “Not my words.”
Slickness. The tip of her tongue against her throat—the curve and hollow there, the pulse. A swipe across sound and ruined skin. Daja’s hands. Polyam is almost used to them now, used to their size; the square nails cut short. She is used to the patterns and the weights in her touch, and the way her own flesh tenses or gives under each weight in a new way. She has been made supple, made shivering. Polyam is used to those fingers in her mouth. The taste of herself. Easy to give into all that. Almost easy to feel the beauty her lover claims and to forget a far-flung date has become tomorrow.
She closes her eyes. She breathes, and the spiralling, spiking, shiver-supple noise of her pleasure comes out with it, even as she is aware of her abandonment, and so is never truly lost. Polyam knows what she is meant to listen to, and Daja smiles into her skin.
She is still very, very young.
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Post by Lisa on Apr 8, 2010 1:28:36 GMT 10
Gods, this is lush and descriptive in ways that fill me with envy. I adore this - especially the last line, because there's so much kindred between Daja and Polyam, yet so many barriers, too.
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Post by PeroxidePirate on Apr 8, 2010 7:23:45 GMT 10
This is delicious, and I'm waiting eagerly to find out more about the "far-flung date (that) has become tomorrow."
Also: I love the summary.
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Post by wordy on Apr 8, 2010 10:00:18 GMT 10
So beautiful! I'm ridiculously jealous of your writing.
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Post by ev on Jul 25, 2010 8:03:55 GMT 10
Man, I love this! The connection between Daja and Polyam is undenying.
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Post by katieheidie on Jul 25, 2010 12:22:55 GMT 10
So beautiful
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