Post by Minuit on Apr 1, 2009 21:05:58 GMT 10
hello all ;D
I need some help. I'm writing a piece of original vampire fiction and need a good name for my villian (it's a he). The one I have is a bit over the top and too cliche. I would love some suggestions as to what name you like for a villian. The only stipulation is that his name cannot start with "D".
Some descriptions of my villian - some scenes he's in
He was the president of the organisation S. A. V. (Society Against Vampires). The dancing flames were reflected in his one glass eye, and cast a garish light on his face, making his scars stand out starkly. He wore a smug and contemptuous sneer on his face, gloating and malevolent. They called him the ‘Avenger’. He has devoted his life to the so-called ‘avenging’ of the innocent human race against vampires. Even though in truth, the vampires he burned were much more innocent than he could ever be. It is well known among vampires that he’s an evil, bloodthirsty creature, who was not above cold-blooded murder to frame and condemn innocent vampires – like my uncle.
... Later in the story ...
[Insert Villian's Name] was waiting in the shadows when they dragged us into the alley: his one good eye gleaming with an evil light. In his hand was a metallic claw, vicious and sharp.
“Let her go!” I demanded. “It’s me you want!” I struggled ineffectually against my bonds. I was helpless.
“But they won’t believe me if they don’t have proof of your brutality.” He stated with a cold, heartless laugh and raised the claw. He stalked towards Joan and growled, “You’ve had this coming, filthy vampire lover!” The claw descended. Joan, bless her soul, didn’t flinch or cower. She stared defiantly at him, right up to the last moment, when he ripped out her throat.
Thank you!
Suggest Away!
I need some help. I'm writing a piece of original vampire fiction and need a good name for my villian (it's a he). The one I have is a bit over the top and too cliche. I would love some suggestions as to what name you like for a villian. The only stipulation is that his name cannot start with "D".
Some descriptions of my villian - some scenes he's in
He was the president of the organisation S. A. V. (Society Against Vampires). The dancing flames were reflected in his one glass eye, and cast a garish light on his face, making his scars stand out starkly. He wore a smug and contemptuous sneer on his face, gloating and malevolent. They called him the ‘Avenger’. He has devoted his life to the so-called ‘avenging’ of the innocent human race against vampires. Even though in truth, the vampires he burned were much more innocent than he could ever be. It is well known among vampires that he’s an evil, bloodthirsty creature, who was not above cold-blooded murder to frame and condemn innocent vampires – like my uncle.
... Later in the story ...
[Insert Villian's Name] was waiting in the shadows when they dragged us into the alley: his one good eye gleaming with an evil light. In his hand was a metallic claw, vicious and sharp.
“Let her go!” I demanded. “It’s me you want!” I struggled ineffectually against my bonds. I was helpless.
“But they won’t believe me if they don’t have proof of your brutality.” He stated with a cold, heartless laugh and raised the claw. He stalked towards Joan and growled, “You’ve had this coming, filthy vampire lover!” The claw descended. Joan, bless her soul, didn’t flinch or cower. She stared defiantly at him, right up to the last moment, when he ripped out her throat.
Thank you!
Suggest Away!