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Post by greenie on Aug 13, 2009 12:53:17 GMT 10
Title: An Unexpected Twist Rating: G Prompt: Puzzles Summary: Arram has no idea what's happening to him or why.
He struggled against the strong arms that held him and the chains that bound his Gift. They’d reached the dungeons, and one guard unlocked a door. He was shoved in unceremoniously, and the barred door slammed shut and locked behind him. “There must be a mistake!” he shouted. “I haven’t done anything wrong!” One of the guards slowed as they walked out. “I’m sorry, Master Draper. We’re just following orders.” The main door closed and he was left alone in the darkness to wonder.
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anilaurel
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Post by anilaurel on Aug 13, 2009 15:35:13 GMT 10
Awesome take on the prompt, I like this one.
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Post by wordy on Aug 13, 2009 15:49:37 GMT 10
Ooh, exciting! You've got a knack for exploring stuff we don't get to see in the books.
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Post by Verasque on Aug 13, 2009 17:02:28 GMT 10
I agree with wordy, you show us the unexplored. I feel as puzzled as Arram!
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Post by ubiquitous on Aug 13, 2009 18:50:57 GMT 10
Ooh, great take on the prompt. ♥
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Post by Rosie on Aug 14, 2009 3:43:43 GMT 10
I adore this! I love the idea of Ozorne turning so quickly Arram doesn't see it coming.
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