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Post by mistrali on Mar 13, 2016 11:18:59 GMT 10
Title: One Last Evening Rating: PG Word Count: 38 Summary (and any Warnings): Polyam's last evening in Janaal. Sexual suggestiveness if you wish to read it that way. Notes: Polyam/OC or friendship, depending on how you choose to read it. Characters: Polyam, OC
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One Last Evening
One more afternoon ride over the violet dunes of south Janaal with Lady Esa, thought Polyam, surely couldn't hurt - nor, if it turned out that way, a last evening spent together in the steam room or the hot springs.
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Post by wordy on Apr 4, 2016 22:00:32 GMT 10
This fic expresses so much with a few well-chosen descriptions!
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Post by mistrali on Apr 5, 2016 17:24:20 GMT 10
Thanks, wordy!
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“Every now and then I like to do as I'm told, just to confuse people.”
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Post by Vala on May 10, 2016 21:03:10 GMT 10
It's really short, but amazing and even seems quite poetic.
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Post by mistrali on May 10, 2016 21:41:57 GMT 10
Thanks, Vala! It was meant to be a one-sentence fic as per the event, so it had to be short ish.
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Post by Vala on May 14, 2016 20:54:02 GMT 10
Of course! But it really was good, the way you suggested so much with so few words.
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