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Post by max on Jun 16, 2012 6:37:22 GMT 10
Series: Firebirds Title: Arabesque Rating: G Event: 110 reverse hurdles. Words: 110. Summary: (including warnings): Scene from a ball. Idc about timelines. Notes: What a nightmare this one was! But most of my other ones are too long to finish.
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He dances with Kalasin, as Zahir dances with Uline, but then she spins apart from him, and his eyes flicker to Zahir’s own: and Zahir doesn’t think he has ever been looked at thus by anyone before.
Remember this, he tells himself silently, though, really, he doesn’t need to.
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The music trembles to a crescendo and they switch partners with its cue – and for an impossible, eternal-feeling moment, they are back to back; Faleron’s presence a cool shiver through his skin.
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Someone once said that balls are an arabesque – literally, a learning curve. Zahir has never held much stock by the sentiment, himself. Or at least, he didn’t, ‘til now.
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Post by Tamari on Jul 1, 2012 8:01:38 GMT 10
There is so much beautiful tension in your writing! This works wonderfully as a reverse, since it works read top to bottom or bottom to top.
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