Elsceetaria
Knight
May or May Not be a Little Teapot
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Post by Elsceetaria on Dec 4, 2011 7:01:57 GMT 10
To: Kris11
Message: You gave me such lovely L/R fic that I tried to to the same for you. I'm afraid that mine isn't quite as lovely, but hopefully it will help make your ficmas bright anyway.
From: Elscy
Title: Warmth Rating: G Words: 150 Wishlist Item: A winter night spent in Discipline Cottage (any characters) Summary: Rosethorn comes in after a cold day in the garden
Rosethorn shivered as she worked in her garden. It was cold, but she needed to get the bulbs planted before the ground got too hard. Thankfully she only had two more before she could go inside the cottage. As she covered the last of the bulbs, she straightened joints that were sore from crouching for hours. The breeze came in briskly, and even though the wall blocked the worst of it down in the garden, what was there was enough to reach down into her bones. He door to the cottage beckoned, and the warmth enveloped her as she made it inside. She saw Lark sitting at the table working on some embroidery. There was an extra cup sitting next to her, and she could hear the kettle whistling on the stove.
As she sat down she examined the contents of her cup, and all she was warmth and love.
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Kris11
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Shipping in Circles
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Post by Kris11 on Dec 4, 2011 7:27:31 GMT 10
! This was more than lovely enough, thank you! My first present! And it was a good one: I loved the way you described the cold throughout this; I could almost feel it! And then the way you described their relationsip without them even looking at each other... Loved it.
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Post by Deleted on Dec 9, 2011 10:32:08 GMT 10
Aww, the soft edge to Rosethorn's sharpness is so beautifully, sweetly rendered. It's a very lovely moment you've captured.
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Post by Kypriotha on Jan 1, 2012 21:15:54 GMT 10
Awww I don't have any other response to this fic but that. I adore Lark and Rosethorn and I love how beautifully you've portrayed their relationship here.
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Post by mistrali on Nov 30, 2012 17:55:26 GMT 10
Awwww. *melts* What a nice picture of a caring, loving home.
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