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Post by Deleted on Sept 1, 2011 7:24:14 GMT 10
Title: Bliss Rating: G Word Count: 151 Card: Summer Bingo: (Fresh + Cotton + Lazy Afternoon + Friends + Fruit) Summary: Lark, Rosethorn, and Crane. Around WotE
He arrived with the sound of the Hub's clock striking midday's end. That was all right. Crane and Rosethorn would both appreciate the privacy, because they were certainly not friends.
(Crane's arms were loaded with fruit of the Endless Islands; yes, Rosethorn, he had successfully cultivated them in his greenhouse. Rosethorn carried a basket of her tomatoes, as if to question the fate of the plant she'd exchanged for Briar's sake.)
Lark's tablecloth, pure white cotton that would never stain, was perfect, both assured her. It whispered in the breeze, mingling with the scent of freshly cut grass.
Lark propped her elbows on it, watching them idly. Clouds, so white they nearly hurt the eyes in the bright daylight, crawled across the sky; the colors of the world were surreal in their vividness. She could almost drift asleep in the lazy afternoon heat.
Flowers were opening in the grass around them.
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Post by journeycat on Sept 1, 2011 13:13:27 GMT 10
Ahh, there is something so simple, and sweet, and incredibly relaxing about this scene. Your writing style and flow is pitch-perfect.
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Post by Deleted on Sept 1, 2011 13:22:11 GMT 10
Lol. Thank you! The relaxation may be because nothing happens.
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