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Post by pandora on Jul 1, 2011 12:33:32 GMT 10
Title: Callous Disregard Rating: PG Couple/Character: Evin Larse/Miri Event: Single Sentence Shot Put Words: 18 Summary: Evin has never been one to let his conscience get in the way.
He knew it was wrong; he knew it was a mistake; he knew it would only hurt them both; he leant down and kissed her anyway.
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Post by wordy on Jul 1, 2011 12:40:17 GMT 10
You managed to capture so much of Evin's character and so much emotion in one little sentence - gorgeous!
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luinae
Rider Trainee
crazy girl
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Post by luinae on Jul 1, 2011 12:57:45 GMT 10
Go Evin go! Lovely little thing.
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Post by pandora on Jul 1, 2011 14:11:10 GMT 10
Thank you both, so much.
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Post by journeycat on Jul 1, 2011 14:39:00 GMT 10
Oooh, I love the format to this - for some reason it made me read it very quickly, and gave it a very rushed feeling, which is the perfect flavor for the plot.
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sidonie
Soldier
lunatic, lover, and poet
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Post by sidonie on Jul 2, 2011 2:00:38 GMT 10
The thing I love about one-sentence fics is that, when done well, they can capture a world of emotion and action in something tight and concise, like good poetry. And this is most certainly done well.
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Post by pandora on Jul 6, 2011 20:42:52 GMT 10
Thank you, I'm glad you liked it!
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