EymberFyire
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Kel/Lalasa. I will go down with this ship.
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Post by EymberFyire on Jul 11, 2011 23:46:39 GMT 10
Title: Cycles Rating: PG Couple/Character: Lalasa/Tian Event: Single sentence shot put Word Count: 44 Summary: Life goes in cycles. Tian Reflects on this.
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This had begun here, with a kiss, apples, honey - trappings of a young spring day- and so she supposed it made sense that it ended here, with the bitter cold seeping through Tian's boots as Lalasa walked away, head high, without looking back.
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Post by gear on Jul 12, 2011 0:55:20 GMT 10
You've managed to put so much emotion and heartbreak into one sentence. It's lovely.
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Post by journeycat on Jul 12, 2011 2:36:52 GMT 10
I was so looking forward to your Lalasa/Tian, and you did not disappoint! This is beautiful and sad, and seeing Lalasa being so strong is both heartbreaking and impressive.
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Post by Rosie on Jul 19, 2011 4:50:47 GMT 10
You are such an endlessly delightful writer - you paint such a picture with so few words.
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