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Post by donotstopthetides on Jul 2, 2011 23:10:32 GMT 10
Title: Charts Rating: G Couple/Character: Numair/Ozorne Words: 26 Event: Single Sentence Shot Put (SSSP) Summary: Charting the course of planets can be difficult work. Note: Constructive criticism is appreciated.
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Ozorne's breath hot on his neck, Arram could only bless his stars that Astrology was so cursed complex that even the future Emperor occasionally needed help.
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sidonie
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Post by sidonie on Jul 3, 2011 3:34:01 GMT 10
Ooh, lovely! I like the way you're writing their mutual, rather quiet attraction. This says a lot, and I love that Ozorne goes to Arram for help.
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Post by Cass on Jul 3, 2011 4:46:26 GMT 10
Heee, this situation is great-- and very plausible!
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Post by donotstopthetides on Jul 3, 2011 5:39:33 GMT 10
sidonieThat's what I was aiming for!
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Post by journeycat on Jul 21, 2011 7:37:05 GMT 10
*fans self* I love the tones of UST I get from this. Very nice!
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