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Post by Cass on Jul 5, 2011 1:26:03 GMT 10
Title: Genesis Rating: PG Character: Kora Event: 110 word hurdle Words: 110 Summary: It's her beginning.
She's waiting tables in an inn when she meets a man with hair the color of corn-silk and cheekbones sharp as knives. He slips her a silver coin-- she bites it just in case-- and gives her a whisper to meet him in the alleyway.
"I'm not a doxy," she warns him. "That's not how things work here."
Looking into his eyes, though, she can see he's hungering for something else.
"You ever want to get out of Scanra? Go someplace with something more?"
She looks at him through lowered lashes. "What's your game?"
He sticks out his hand. "I think this is the beginning of something interesting."
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Post by journeycat on Jul 5, 2011 2:42:08 GMT 10
Ahhh, I love how you've written the meeting between Kora and Rosto! There's no trivial conversation, no games - they're so straight up with each other.
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Post by PeroxidePirate on Jul 21, 2011 7:40:12 GMT 10
I love her strength, and like Mandi said, their directness.
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