domluvr
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Post by domluvr on Mar 8, 2011 13:33:15 GMT 10
Title: Hindsight Rating: PG Word Count: 113 words Pairing: Dom/Evin - Team Underpants Round/Fight: 1A Summary: Hindsight’s 20/20. If they had known what would happen, maybe things would have ended differently. Warning: character death
If Dom hadn’t pranked the Riders, they never would have met.
If Evin hadn’t retaliated, they never would have become friends.
If Dom hadn’t left for war, Evin never would have kissed him.
If Evin hadn’t dropped his bedroll in the river, they never would have slept together.
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If Evin had known those women were rumours, he never would have started the fight.
If Dom had known Evin loved him, he never would have been so offended by the accusations.
If Evin had known Dom loved him, he never would have been hit with that arrow.
If Dom had known he would lose him, he would have told him how he felt.
QC by: journeycat
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Post by journeycat on Mar 8, 2011 13:40:10 GMT 10
Oh, Crystal. This is so sad, and I love the cause-and-effect format to this.
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domluvr
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Post by domluvr on Mar 8, 2011 21:15:36 GMT 10
Thanks Mandi!
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Post by pandora on Mar 8, 2011 21:55:29 GMT 10
Oh, this is so sad... But so wonderful
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sidonie
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Post by sidonie on Mar 8, 2011 22:49:02 GMT 10
Poor Evin . . . I can see that your claims about how often you kill him were not exaggerated. I love the format; the matter-of-fact nature of it makes the deep emotions somehow more poignant, and it's heartbreaking to think about love necessarily causing loss.
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domluvr
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Post by domluvr on Mar 9, 2011 7:47:49 GMT 10
Thanks!
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