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Post by Cass on Mar 16, 2011 21:56:26 GMT 10
Title: Knots Rating: R Wordcount: 117 Pairing: Aly/Taybur Round: 1D Summary: They shouldn't be doing this. Obviously.
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He stares at her through dark, hooded eyes, busy hands stilling.
"We shouldn't be doing this," Taybur says, looking at her flesh, how small and pale and freckled it appears under his large, weather-beaten palms.
"Obviously," Aly responds, hooking a leg over his for leverage. "But this isn't exactly time for doubts. That line was crossed some time ago--most likely when you decided to find out how quickly you could untie my sarong."
"Your husband--"
"Won't find out," she finishes smoothly, rolling her hips enough to make him twitch. "I'll make sure of it."
"Not even your power stretches that far," Taybur mutters dryly, but his body is leading his brain at the moment and he succumbs.
QC by: journeycat
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Post by journeycat on Mar 17, 2011 2:46:57 GMT 10
Mmm, this is delicious, and you've captured Aly's attitude very well here.
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Post by Seek on Mar 17, 2011 3:02:22 GMT 10
I agree with Mandi; do love the way you've portrayed Aly here as very devil-may-care, etc!
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Post by Cass on Mar 18, 2011 8:05:14 GMT 10
Thanks! Aly is fun to write, even though I don't like her...
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Post by Kris11 on Mar 18, 2011 9:23:05 GMT 10
This is excellent! I love your descriptions of their bodies/actions. They were very clear and had great imagery.
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