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Post by Lisa on Apr 8, 2011 12:02:46 GMT 10
Title: First Kisses Rating: PG Word Count: 154 Pairing: Circlecest Fight: 1/H Summary: The first one is a shock for everyone.
When their lips first touched, it had been an impulsive, surprising action. Randomly kissing people wasn’t a part of Daja’s life; her experiences had often involved a gradual – even when speedy – build up with exchanges of heated glances and double entendres.
But this happened so quickly that it surprised them both – as well as the other two people who were still forged in a mental connection that they’d forgotten to block. The only thing more surprising then the quick brushing of lips was the violent jolt of shock in their minds.
But Daja’s – the voices broke off, suddenly, both parties likely ashamed of admitting that they’d witnessed such a moment in any capacity.
And Briar looked back at Daja, confusion in his eyes. “But you’re—” he stammered, echoing his foster-sisters.
“I always said that no fellow could compare to you,” Daja replied, heat rushing to her cheeks as she turned away from him.
QC by PeroxidePirate
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Kit
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Post by Kit on Apr 8, 2011 15:08:55 GMT 10
My heart, it stopped.
That was delightful, and elegantly written. I love the examination of Daja's usual kisses, as well as the sweetness of this one.
And I DO like it when the others watch *grin*
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Post by PeroxidePirate on Apr 9, 2011 1:12:28 GMT 10
Hee, I love how startled everyone is.
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