Rowena
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Post by Rowena on Mar 29, 2011 9:07:26 GMT 10
Title: An Act of Desperation Rating: R Word Count: 166 Pairing: Kel/Jon Round/Fight: 1/F Summary: Jon is desperate for Kel. Warning: Character death. “Please, Keladry,” he whispered, desperation coloring his words. “Say you’ll be mine.” She yanked her arm out of his hand, backing to the other end of the chamber. “No, Your Majesty,” she said. “You’re married. Thayet doesn’t deserve this. It would be wrong.” Defeated, he didn’t go after her, and the Lady Knight fled from the room. * * * * * There was a crowd of courtiers outside the king’s chambers, but strangely, for once, none of them were talking. Kel pushed her way to the front, and stopped short when she saw the scene in front of her. Jonathan’s hands were around Thayet’s neck, lowering her slowly to the ground. The queen’s eyes were glassy, her face pale. The king looked up, meeting Kel’s eyes. “See?” His usually strong voice quavered. “I did it for you. Now there’s no problem – we can be together.” Kel backed out of the room, shocked to her core, as the voice of the Head Healer followed her: “It was an act of desperation.” QC by: Lisafer
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Post by bookworm on Mar 29, 2011 10:12:23 GMT 10
I'm speechless. This is awesome. I love how Jon loves Kel so much he kills Thayet for her. Beautifully done.
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Post by Shhasow on Mar 29, 2011 12:37:50 GMT 10
*wince* Ouch! Truly a desperate man.
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Rowena
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Post by Rowena on Mar 30, 2011 9:17:30 GMT 10
bookworm - I'm glad you like it Shhasow - yeah, I know For some reason all of my plot bunnies (and the only one my friend suggested) involve Thayet dying/being dead. But I really don't have anything against her. Promise
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Post by kateofcarlay on Mar 30, 2011 14:45:30 GMT 10
You killed Thayet. And I'm laughing, this probably isn't a good thing, but liked it, I could see Jon doing this though, he always came off as very selfish to me. great work! KATE
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Rowena
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Post by Rowena on Apr 3, 2011 0:33:02 GMT 10
Oh my gosh KATE! *glomps* You're here! *squees* I should probably go find your welcome thread post now, right? I love your avatar and sig, by the way. *sighs* See, I've influenced you too. And yeah...I seem to have a killing Thayet problem this round. I just like her too much for Jon to cheat on her seriously! *sigh* I'm glad you liked it
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